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Example exhibit

I chose to look at some historical data.

They were amazing!

2. What's missing? What does the best version of this look like?

1. Title! Needs a title.
2. Card component with images and titles.
3. Indentation

Peer editing.

1. Read the first two paragraphs, then skim the rest.

2. Identify the theme. Is it in the first paragraph?

3. What makes you interested in reading this further.

4. What is unclear about the initial description? Remember,

  **you** are the audience for this writing more than me.